Our Life's Prayer

Carnal syrup which flows within,
why not make it art?
It has been spilled
enough to fill
the gloomy pit of Tartarus.
Ferry to us the draught of life.
Preserve us from dissolution,
for our gene codes fight dauntlessly,
against this.
Be not used to segregate others,
for humanity is one tribe.
Thou art the mystery, the
sinew, and the richness
that makes our lives worth living. Yes.
--
For Poetry Thursday. This poem is based on a Poetry Thursday exercise using a style called ekphrasis. The photograph is of a piece by René de Guzman and is titled Blood Color Theory. His artworks allude to current issues such as the HIV/AIDS crisis in the early 1990s. In this piece, de Guzman sandwiched his own blood, mixed with preservatives, between two Plexiglass sheets. The work's impact lies partly in the shock value to convey the message, and the work takes on the formal qualities of a minimalist painting. What I find intriguing are the images reflected. This poem, which echoes The Lord's Prayer, is the result.



3 Comments:
Hmmm. Not one for me in imagery or content, blood being the created not the creator, but I think you have written well on a difficult, challenging theme and have kept a certain familiar rhythm.
My PT is up.
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Norma, at 10:22 AM
I love this! On first reading it seems strange, but it raises so many questions as does the artwork. Excellent. Yes.
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Crafty Green Poet, at 6:54 AM
I like the concepts behind both works. Thank you for bringing the artist to my attention. I like the structure of your poem. Very strong.
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...deb, at 8:58 PM
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