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Thursday, March 22, 2007

These Old Boots


These boots were once fresh,
a leather pair of strutting
peacocks flaunting
straight laces in full plumage.
They boasted proud soles,
like granite; impervious
to water, stoic in heat
and cold. These centurions
marched to conquer.

Now the plumage, frayed
and faded, holds scuffed
split leather by a thread.
Mile after mile erased
the heels. They are failed
sentries against enemy
pebbles and creeping rot.
These wounded soldiers
wear the perfume of decay
waiting to hike one last
time into the shadows.

--
For Poetry Thursday; from an exercise in The Poet's Companion. Photo by Fedot Praslov, used under the Creative Commons License.

4 Comments:

  • I liked this poem a lot -- the extended metaphor of the boots as soldiers was very effective. Well done!

    By Blogger Michelle, at 7:48 PM  

  • I couldn't help but think of the Skin Horse in the Velveteen Rabbit with his fur loved off.

    By Anonymous Fran aka Redondowriter, at 8:25 PM  

  • "These wounded soldiers
    wear the perfume of decay
    waiting to hike one last
    time into the shadows."--

    Nice poem and quiet poignant considering the times.

    Welcome to Poetry Thursday! This is just my 2nd time posting, but I have been enjoying the poetry here for a while.

    Hope we hear more from you.

    By Blogger Kimberley McGill, at 11:06 PM  

  • "They are failed
    sentries against enemy
    pebbles and creeping rot."

    I like these lines. Great verse.

    Welcome to PT!

    gautami
    Soul

    By Blogger gautami tripathy, at 8:56 PM  

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